Inevitable
A mourning doves beakis threaded with vine;and a girl stands clingingto thoughts of the bird --its song, its half-woven nest.Suddenly, she steps back watching her shadowed skirts fall between ferns...
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Enjoyed, Wendy...I might end it on 'boss.'while i like the poetic description of the last lines, i'm not sure they fit here.
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being a seamstress how can I not love thisand the ending is so lovely tooI covet your fan of leavesit is especially beautiful.dwww.dorothydmienko.com
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Hi RayThanks so much for sharing your persepctive. The ending I wanted to specify that she was brought over from a city in China, Guillen. It is known for its rice fields and also its artistry of...
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Ms Gwendrina, please don't explain it all after you write it. I must agree that the craft is good but i want to fancy it for myself. the only thing i might consider editing is s1:A mourning doves...
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Hi DeirdreThanks for stopping by. As always, I really appreciate your perspective and input. Interesting arrangement you've placed here in the first strophe. I'll be considering everything when I...
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I enjoy the clarification, wendy...especially if it makes you consider every choice and how much is coming across to the reader...i think most of it does come across--if not always consciously (which...
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The words and images pulled me in, Wendy."she steps backwatching her shadowed skirtsfall between fernsand sunlight perusing lesions on a warehouse door. Is this natures way of scattering I Ching?She...
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RayThanks so much for sharing your perspective. Your insight is always welcome and really helps me to focus when reviewing my own work. I appreciate your time and thoughtful consideration!KerriAlways...
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